[stygianwitch]

Yeah, i prefer the first ending, i stil think there's alittle something missing, maybe a few lucid moments but i don't feel he would ever get out of that place

Still a damn good story though, and i really did enjoy it

i agree with tic, it would sit well in a book of modern short horror stories, hope you're going to write some more, with stories this good you could fill the whole book