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yeah, right "wyll"
Please stop spamming us scriptleak/wyll.
If you had come onto the site and actually tried to make a contribution of any kind I might let this weak bit of writing slide, but I have to tell you your writing lacks originality, pacing and character and a point of view, and your poor understanding of film terms reeks of incompetence.
You are posting script exerpts... or rather scripts for a trailer.
Have you written the full script yet? If so, send it to a website that can help you (try moviebytes.com or triggerstreet)
If you want help with your screenplay/ideas/films just say so. We're pretty good at helping, but these multiple posts are annoying as hell.
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