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Morning,
I subbed to your channel
I really liked for a short the premises and can easily see it been made it something more fleshed out.
If I had to provide any constructive feedback it would be the narration is good but is missing something not sure what.
If you check out Rob Gavagan on Youtube he nails it.
I'm not saying its bad but with a slight change in tone it could be even better.
I'll continue to watch your videos :)
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