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I watch your pitch and the intro to the movie.
My impressions are: Your artwork is phenomenal. Very impressed. The story doesn't do much for me. It doesn't give me a sense of darkness or uncanny. Just that the main character is a slob without substance. Also while the images themselves are fantastic, the quick succession of them doesn't reflect a state of confusion or speeding thoughts. I find it slightly annoying. You could be simpler and an achieve a lot more.
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