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Old 11-06-2006, 02:31 PM
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I found the first part of this disturbing, hopefully that was your intention, you describe the abuse Laurie suffered at the hands of her husband very well

another good storyline that leaves the reader wondering what triggered the change, was it the animal bite or was it something she always had the ability to do but didn't know about until her husabands rage and her own terror triggered it

keep 'em coming :)


Are you working on anything longer, a novelette (think that's what they're called :o ) maybe, or a full length novel?
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