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Old 11-06-2006, 05:41 PM
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Originally Posted by stygianwitch View Post
I found the first part of this disturbing, hopefully that was your intention, you describe the abuse Laurie suffered at the hands of her husband very well

another good storyline that leaves the reader wondering what triggered the change, was it the animal bite or was it something she always had the ability to do but didn't know about until her husabands rage and her own terror triggered it

keep 'em coming :)


Are you working on anything longer, a novelette (think that's what they're called :o ) maybe, or a full length novel?
I'm woprking on a dark fantasy novel right now. I will admit i am glad you found the beginning disturbing, that was my intention. It makes the end so much better :)
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