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""And before you ask for some reason she can't leave the walls of the college at least until he returns""
You should have a reason WHY she can't leave the walls. "For some reason" sounds like you haven't put that much thought into the history of the ghost. It also doesn't work for your ending since Jack and Lisa are in a house when they are visited. Perhaps you should consider tying it in to something at beginning for the legend to unfold rather than Rob seemingly blurting it out of the blue because somebody thought they heard something.
Just a suggestion. Good luck with it. Nice to see it was actually written out in screenplay form.
CK
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