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01-30-2007, 08:22 PM
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Make up your mind. I'm a professional screenwriting willing to help when asked. But you blew it so... ***ignore***
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01-30-2007, 08:35 PM
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Return, Rod...
This guy didn't start the thread, Death to All did. A Sickened Pup just showed up mid-thread and posted a single scene short about a crippled kid getting attacked by a dog, which by the way seems rather pointless. Or am I missing the point? What's the point of having a crippled kid getting attacked by a family dog?
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01-30-2007, 10:52 PM
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I dunno...I guess you have to be in my head....
let me break it down..opening scene starts with a close up of a tv playing an annoying children's show ...cut to a little girl seated at the kitchen table. Kimi a dark haired 5 year old wearing leg braces is singing along with the tv while playing in her cereal EAT she screams....cut to the family dog in his basket ..a bug eye mutt wakes up and glares at kimi "eat is what you do eat its good for you" cheers kimi has she screams along with the tv the dog now visibly shakes every time kimi screams..and what's worse is now she has begin banging her leg braces against her chair close up of the dogs face has you hear kimi banging leg braces ...clang ...clang ...clang...clang doorbell rings cut to kimi franticly swinging her legs around and sliding out of her chair ...cut to the outside of the house has a mail man walks down the very steep steps cut to kimi now try to balance herself has she walks down the hall to the front door she opens the front door and screams "hi mail man" .... the dog now filled with rage gets up from his basket cut to kimi now leaning out over the steep front steps cut to the dog has he blots towards kimi and thuds has the dog rams her out the door cut to the next morning kimi's mom pours milk over cereal...and and sits down next to her (the annoying children's show is on again and is singing "eat your food") cut to kimi who is now wearing a neck brace.."hurt" says kimi "eat" says mom has she spoons cereal in to kimis mouth cut to the dog has he turns uncomfortably in his basket ...end I guess it really has no point other than your house pets could be psychotic...I duuno maybe it does suc
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01-31-2007, 07:33 AM
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"Little, vicious minds abound with anger and revenge, and are incapable of feeling the pleasure of forgiving their enemies." Earl of Chesterfield "A man that studieth revenge keeps his own wounds green, which otherwise would heal and do well." Francis Bacon
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01-31-2007, 09:50 AM
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nice board.....flamers and trolls......see ya
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#16
01-31-2007, 09:59 AM
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add leg braces .....
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#17
01-31-2007, 10:08 AM
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so what you want me to make the 1rst move?
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#18
01-31-2007, 10:23 AM
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*scares off anouther little kid*
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