I didn't find this to be horrible... it's just nothing new. There were some good points- like the great shot toward the end with the man filling the screen in a diagonal angle- very well done. Some of the use of lighting and color was inventive.
And there were bad parts- the guy running and running and yelling at everyone to get out of the way endlessly- he doesn't even pass one person the whole time, so why is he yelling at them to get out of the way? The whole handheld camera thing is played out. It doesn't allow for any pacing. Rent a tripod, map out some shots and edit them together to make a tight sequence that creates tension and suspense.
Anyway- this looks as competant as anything you can see on FearNet, so good luck.
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