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02-26-2012, 04:45 AM
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Tony Vilgotsky's Terror from the Toilet Bowl
Here is the beginning of my script "Terror from the Toilet Bowl" - the short narration before the movie starts.
Narrator: You may have easy, carefree, comfortable life in a big warm house with all the modern conveniences. You may live in a most safe town in America where no any criminals except the pocket thieves are. You may be richer than Bill Gates and have a golden bowl in your closet. But… all these things will not actually protect you from the danger that threatens to you from the deep… Just take a look around. Every day and every night we are pouring the megatons of different crap down into the sewers. But do we really care – what this crap is and what results it might bring after the total mixing down there, in the underground? Have you ever thought – what if the things that you’re eating today, will devour you tomorrow? When you pour any chemical trash into a toilet bowl – can you imagine, which monsters could grow from it several days after? And… do you really think that masturbation in a closet is the safest kind of sex? Do you really think so? However, reality is much more difficult thing than we could ever imagine… To be continued... 
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02-26-2012, 08:05 AM
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Would you like me to edit this for you?
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02-26-2012, 08:22 AM
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What do you mean? Grammar mistakes? Yes, I will be pleased:)
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02-26-2012, 09:08 AM
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Narrator: You may have an easy, carefree, comfortable life in a big warm house with all the modern conveniences. You may live in the safest town in America, where there are no criminals except pickpockets. You may be richer than Bill Gates and have a golden bowl in your closet. But… all these things will not protect you from the danger that threatens you from the deep…
Just take a look around. Every day and every night we are pouring megatons of different crap down the sewers. But do we really care – what this crap is and what results it might bring after it mixes down there underground? Have you ever thought – what if the things that you’re eating today will devour you tomorrow? When you pour any chemical trash into a toilet bowl – can you imagine which monsters could grow from it several days later? And… do you really think that masturbation in a closet is the safest kind of sex? Do you really think so? However, reality is much more difficult thing than we could ever imagine…
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02-26-2012, 09:28 AM
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Thank you!:D
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02-26-2012, 10:56 PM
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Great stuff and kudos to Neverending for helping you out :)
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02-27-2012, 01:19 AM
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Thank you! You guys are inspiring me to continue ASAP:)
Last edited by Tony Vilgotsky; 02-27-2012 at 03:22 AM.
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