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Old 12-11-2005, 09:59 AM
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I finished the script, last week, and I should begin shooting this week.

If you guys want to have a look at it and give me feedback or CC on it than go ahead, its about 12 pages long in total though. I do believe this version does have some spelling/grammer mistakes but not to worry splling and what not in proper script are already taken care of.
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Old 12-11-2005, 01:17 PM
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""And before you ask for some reason she can't leave the walls of the college at least until he returns""

You should have a reason WHY she can't leave the walls. "For some reason" sounds like you haven't put that much thought into the history of the ghost. It also doesn't work for your ending since Jack and Lisa are in a house when they are visited. Perhaps you should consider tying it in to something at beginning for the legend to unfold rather than Rob seemingly blurting it out of the blue because somebody thought they heard something.
Just a suggestion. Good luck with it. Nice to see it was actually written out in screenplay form.
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Old 12-12-2005, 06:11 AM
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Rob "blurting" it out is meant to be kinda of a joke, you know as in it's just some story not real, this is the reason why they decided to see if it is real or not.

And now that you mention it does sound rather weird that he says
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And before you ask for some reason she can't leave the walls of the college at least until he returns
I think, I'll change that during shooting.
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Old 12-12-2005, 08:30 AM
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Just my thoughts on it. Don't take it as gospel :D
When do you start shooting ?
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Old 12-12-2005, 08:37 AM
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lol, We start this wednesday, I'm trying to get most of the important stuff done first before the holidays and then we will start shooting once again after the holidays.
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Old 12-18-2005, 02:24 PM
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Is there any bread in your film?

I want a ghost film with a piece of bread in it.

Wait, that's a toast film...

Carry on.

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