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03-11-2013, 12:23 PM
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Caliginosity: Archaic Darkness
Hey Guys,
A friend of mine made this short film, and is hoping to get some feedback from the community. He wants to know what people like, what they don't like, or what they think might make the film better. The actors are just friends, so please don't be too hard on their performance. Thanks for the help! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xIt5Bd7i0oY 
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03-11-2013, 02:01 PM
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I quite liked the camera work and sound, but the opening dialogue kinda sucked, felt stilted and forced and wasnt really needed. Thought the monster reveal was ok too but could've done without the corridor running shot as it just looked too much like a dude in a monster suit running down the hall. Good luck with your future projects. :cool:
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03-11-2013, 02:14 PM
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Very horrifying monster. My one critique is that it is left unexplained how it got into the locked room.
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