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Old 11-24-2003, 06:54 AM
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an experience not to forget

I wrote this in some thread, kinda sucked it out of my thumb, but I think it's fun to read, enjoy


you ever had that feeling?
you're walking in the city, it's about half past midnight
not a soul in the streets
you are thinking, aaah what a beautifull evening
then you hear a strange noise, you think, meh, the wind
you hear the scratching off metal against the asfalt
you look back only to see an empty road
your heart starts to pound a bit, you're thinking what the fuck, I need to cut back on my drinks
you're walking further , take a right, take a left, only to find yourself in the same street you heard the noise in, you get freaked, scared
you hear the scratching again, followed by a loud tsing sound, you hear dripping sounds, you look up, it's not raining, you cannot look down again, something is very wrong, your head starts to tilt further backwards, then you see the asfalt closing in on you, then you realize, your head has been cut of by the grimm reaper, he stands there, silent as ever, leaning foreward, sticking out his claw, grabbing you by the hair and dragging your head further away into darkness
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Old 12-20-2003, 11:03 AM
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i like it did you make it up??
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Old 12-25-2003, 04:10 PM
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Well did you make it up?:confused:
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Old 12-26-2003, 05:03 AM
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yes I did, didn't take to long either
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Old 12-26-2003, 12:04 PM
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really its good
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Old 01-05-2004, 08:36 PM
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no I've never had that feeling, but it would be weird if I did.
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Old 01-14-2004, 12:48 PM
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That was very cool and your write its fun to read
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"Please dont kill me. I dont wont to die. I wont to live. I wont to have my baby, I wont to have my baby." susan said she looked Sharon straight in the eye and said "look, bitch, I dont care about you. I dont care if you are going to have a baby. You better be ready, You're going to die and I dont feel anything about it."
Then susan said "In a few minutes I killed her and she was dead"
After killing sharon susan noticed there was blood on her hand she tasted it. "wow what a trip" she told Virginia. "I thought to taste death, and yet give life."
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Old 01-14-2004, 02:14 PM
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i enjoyed it as well. Your very good at building suspense and tension. Ever thought about persuing writing as a career?
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