That was a great story, it has all the right ingredients... suspense, atmosphere... the build up to the end was fantastic

Hope you're gonna post regularly, i could stand to read many more where this one came from :)

Excellent!!

Bump by suggestion.

I really need to complete my new story, The Wizard of Memphis, because I want fans opinions and I'm going to try to publish. Hopefully excerpts will come soon.

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This is quite good...In a world where most writers (and film makers) simply play "follow the leader", this is unique. Stick with it, try to get it published, and don't fall in line with the rest of the "monkey see monkey do" crowd. If you ever opt for publishing I, for one, will be buying what you're selling. :D


Thanks for sharing with us.