It has potential...

brutal, i like it...the loosing of the head was a little to much though, just end it with the stab thats beautifull.

the reson i used the loseing of the head was i thought it would be cool to see the head stuck to the door n all the vanes n stuff

Pretty cool death thehalk. It's brilliant. Tell us the other kills in this horror movie you're writing and please try to type good. I'm getting tired of not being able to know wat you're talking about.

if u want i can tell u the seconed 1 but it isn't as good as the 1st 1 but the other r

sure. that would be good.

that kill is brutal but dont you think the loosing of the head is a little over the top for the first kill i mean nearing the end or half way threw is fine but the first kill???
and please check your spelling next time

He always spells like that:o :rolleyes:

The Halk actually IM'd me yesterday and I believe he's working on another one. I don't know if he'll be back to post it though.

yo I'm going to rewrite the story I was write in whitch I told u the 1st kill because the story was erased so if u still wan't me to write I'm thinking up a new story so I wan't to here yea's or nay's