That does sound cool Dave...and I think there is a story from the Grimms that has something where I can fit that in.

Do you like my ideas so far?

xxfrostyxx

How about this...

Everything exists because of two young girls and an eternal curse.

One is always awake, always working to maintain the physical world.

The other is always asleep, dreaming all the things that exist in the supernatural.

One day a little boy discovers where they live and awakens the sleeping sister. Suddenly all the magic in the world disappears. The age of Fairy Tales ends as the boy marries the sleeping girl.

I like the sound of that Rod, very inventive.

xxfrostyxx

I'm currently writting a storyette about the seven dwarves but as you may have guessed it is very different to the snow white story.

It seems there are a lot of people writing fairytales around here. I've got too many ideas floating around in my head right now...thats why instead of doing just one story I'm doing an entire collection.

xxfrostyxx

Here's a little taster from my story. Isaac is the kings son and there are nine other men there.


Bartholomew, the Butler ordered one of the men to go over and check it out. James, the fattest of the ten crept over to the door. He undid the bolt and opened the door a crack. The pale moonlight shone in and illuminated the coffin which had fallen open. One of the men was sick.
“Nothing there,” said James slowly. The driver was walking over as James opened the door a little bit wider. Suddenly, the entire mood changed. There was banging and screaming as James’s head was pulled through the door. Five of the men including Bartholomew, Isaac and the driver ran over to him and grabbed onto his limbs trying desperately to pull him back. A deafening screech filled the air as lighting flashed and the rainwater trickled in. It was red.
They made one final pull and managed to pull in James. There worries weren’t over though. The door was opening as one of the creatures arms shot through and started thrashing around for more. Bartholomew ran over to the left side of the door and threw all his weight at it, Isaac did the same. Shrieks cut through the clanging as the creatures arm was slowly crushed. Bones crunched and splintered as the arm thrashed more wildly. Blood started to appear trickling down the wooden doors an one finger turned blue. A blood stained bone cracked and shot through the skin. A tear formed along the skin shooting wildly down the creatures arm and muscle, veins and bone were revealed. Finally, the doors shut together.

Ohh grisley...nice work....

xxfrostyxx

You bastard!

Stop publicly stating these ideas of yours! It makes them harder to steal:D

I should really put a copywrite on my ideas...but like I've said to many people, idea steeling isn't that common...well I've been told anyway.

xxfrostyxx

In mine the seven dwarves are actually inbred midgets with long claws and sharp teeth. Also, the mirror mirror on the wall was actually a man who was having a affair with the queen but she caught him kissing snow white telling her that she was the mostbeautiful girl of all. Mine is taking out the magic and suck and making it more horror movie style. Ill keep posting the more gruesome bits. The bit up there /\ is from the very beginning.

Interesting plot there Ferretchucker, sounds very horrific and gruesome, can't wait to see what you post next. Mine has more magic in it, but its all black magic, nobody is who they seem and you can't ever trust what a character says.

xxfrostyxx

im gonna post the description of what snow white's corpse looks like soon!

hoorah! this should be itneresting Ferretchucker, can't wait!

xxfrostyxx

im aiming for 10,000 words in total.

I've completed 1/5 of that.

I dont go by word count when I'm writing a story, it's too easy for me to go over it when I write. I just go with the flow and make sure that scenes aren't lagging and that the ones that are I make sure I cut them.

xxedenxx

im just scared I'll forget about it and leave it wih my other 3000 unfinished projects.

I know exactly what you mean! I've got the same problem...I start stories then an inspiration for another hits me and I get too envolved in that and forget about the stories I haven't complited

xxedenxx

curse you low attention span!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I blame TV!!!! lol but I shouldn't say that otherwise I'll be smotted by the Entertaiment Gods!

xxedenxx

you mean pixel and radiation?

Lest we forget blindness!

lol

right on

xxedenxx

I almost forgot!


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xxedenxx

Picture this.
snow white and her hoarde of 7 pimps are caught.
snow white is subjected to hours of abuse by her captors
when finally ..exhausted she is decapitated and her head is left
laying there for the hounds of the night to feast on.
6 of the dwarves were slaughtered but one escapes..hiding himself in the
bushes untill his captors give up and report back to the wicked step mother that
her evil plan has been carried out..but not letting on that 1 was indeed still alive.
As night falls...the dwarf retrieves snow whites head and her mutilated body and drags her slowly but surely back to thier cabin in the woods in which he
painstakingly tries to put her back together again..sewing her head on ..using
sack string and rusted pins.
Through his hours of heartbroken sobs and work..he gets angry..so angry he shouts out a curse that is so fierce..the trees in the woods almost get toppled and the wind howls as if sharing his pain.

That night as the wicked step mother relishes in her success..she takes a sip of wine and as she is checking herself in her magic mirror ..she grins to her own admiration and once again asks..
'mirror mirror on the wall..who is the fairest of them all'
All of a sudden the room is plunged into total darkness and her scream is deafening as snow whites bruised and battered ghostly figure steps out from the mirror n whispers in a grotesque kind of voice...
why it is none other than you mommy dearest' :D

i gotta go now. Adios amigos, and keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A girl of no older than twenty five lay in the box. Her blonde hair was stained with green and brown. A few leaves She was missing three fingers on her left hand and there were scratches all over he forearm. A large chunk near her left elbow was hanging on by a thin layer on skin. The white bone was visible through the torn muscle and tissue. Her neck consisted of three thick strands of skin. The rest had been torn off. One of her eyes was missing and the skin around it had been torn off.
Her other eye was completely purple, likewise to the area around it. Her nose appeared to be broken and swollen. Her mouth, which was open, was a poll of blood. There were bits of her gums floating in the scarlet liquid. The most shocking thing however was her left leg. It appeared that the creatures had wanted to lift it up from the knee the wrong way around. It was bent upwards and parts of bone were sticking through the skin. There were many chunks in it and hundreds of scratches. All over her were bite marks and bruises.