Absolutely no offense taken. If the book comes across long winded I need to know that. Ill have to find places to cut it down. Mind you, I still have about 15 chapters to add.

Thanks. I'm writer too. Not an author yet, but hopefully I will be.

Yeah, seems to be a hard world. Luckily its kind of my side thing. I submitted to a couple of agents last week, now the waiting game. Im hoping to draw some feedback from them if anything.

Hope people still enjoy sci fi because that what I am writing.

I love sci-fi as long as its kind of gory... unfortunately if blood doesn't cover the walls I lose interest. The only clean sci-fi I ever really got into was "The Dark Tower" from Stephen King. Love that shit!

You've lost interest. I'm the H.G. Wells type. :[

as an english graduate and an avid reader i found the sentence structures very basic and regimented, the content varied but felt repetetive. thats just me, and one opinion is not everyones, but im always honest and say what i think.

It's ok, we can't all love everything. I would still read your work for supports sake.

I appreciate that vamp. That's what I need. I have no clue what I'm actually doing so comments like that help me figure out the details. I'll work on it.

I like gory stuff just never had the nack of writing it. So I just started writing what I knew best.