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bloodcreature 10-17-2006 04:18 PM

Spiritual Sorrow
 
I read a new novel called Spiritual Sorrow. It starts out with a young boy named David who has an abusive father. One evening his father comes home drunk and kills David's mother. Of course, this is just the beginning as his father meets an untimely death with help from something mysterious.



This something is not mortal and later in his life David realizes he is possessed by this "friend" that is actually a powerful demon.



This demon helps David. At least, he thinks the evil spirit is helping and David must finally take action to stop this menace in his life, with the help of his son, before it is too late.



The story has a few surprises and twist and will keep you reading. However, as with most self published novels, it can use some editing in certain parts to make it less predictable and a bit more original. You can read the first chapter by clicking on the link below then post your opinion.





First Chapter

The_Return 10-17-2006 04:55 PM

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Originally Posted by bloodcreature (Post 491272)
I read a new novel called Spiritual Sorrow. It starts out with a young boy named David who has an abusive father. One evening his father comes home drunk and kills David's mother. Of course, this is just the beginning as his father meets an untimely death with help from something mysterious.



This something is not mortal and later in his life David realizes he is possessed by this "friend" that is actually a powerful demon.



This demon helps David. At least, he thinks the evil spirit is helping and David must finally take action to stop this menace in his life, with the help of his son, before it is too late.



The story has a few surprises and twist and will keep you reading. However, as with most self published novels, it can use some editing in certain parts to make it less predictable and a bit more original. You can read the first chapter by clicking on the link below then post your opinion.





First Chapter

Sounds pretty good...I'll have to check out that chapter when I get more time.

PS - Havent seen you around in awhile...hows it going?

bloodcreature 10-17-2006 07:50 PM

Thanks
 
I have been very busy working overtime. I have been fine and hope your are to. I intend to post more on my prison thread, but have been webmastering two different sites... too much work. lol

Thanks for asking and have a happy Halloween!

bloodcreature 01-02-2007 12:17 PM

A new Horror Novel
 
http://www.aaronscryptofgorgothica.com/page19.html

Here is a link to the first chapter if the first one doesn't work. If you like demon possession novels with a twist then you should read this one.


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