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Thanks for the comments. Here's a little more. And only if you're nice to me will i post what happens at the end lol.
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TOM races to the front door but ...
INT. HALLWAY - CONTINUOUS
... he's suddenly running through the back door and is now
standing where he was during the conversation with the mystery
girl.
MICHAEL(OS)
Tom !?
TOM jumps.
MICHAEL(CONT)(OS)
I'm hurt bad !
TOM
(snapping)
You're not Michael you rotten fucking son of
a bitch !
MICHAEL(OS)
Help me
TOM covers his ears.
TOM
No, no no no no nononononono!!!!!!!!
He falls to his knees.
The killer is standing in front of him.
TOM looks up.
He's speechless.
The dishelved maniac stares down at him.
TOM
Wha ... wha ... who
TOM stands.
He begins to back into the kitchen.
INT. KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS
The killer follows calmly.
TOM(CONT)
Stay the fuck away from me
TOM grabs his backpack where he dropped it early and in a rage
begins to beat on the maniac that stands before him. He's
pounding at him, grunting in a crazed rage.
TOM(CONT)
DIE ... YOU ... SON OF A BITCH !!!!
The maniac falls and TOM collapses on the floor exhausted. He
throws his backpack away. He looks at the killer.
It's MICHAEL. He's bleeding profusely from the head.
TOM(CONT)
No ... no
TOM lunges at his friend and shakes him.
TOM(CONT)
Michael !!! ... Michael wake up !!!
No response.
TOM(CONT)
Oh God I killed him
TOM stands and backs into ...
INT. HALLWAY - CONTINUOUS
... the killer. Who's now standing in the hallway. TOM turns.
TOM
Who are you
The killer reaches for TOM who moves out of the way.
TOM(CONT)
Stay there, answer my question you son of a
bitch ... who are you ?
The killer stands there.
TOM(CONT)
Answer me .... answer me
The killer moves toward TOM again. TOM backs away further.
TOM(CONT)
You made me kill Michael
(beat)
You made me kill my best friend
The killer takes another step closer.
TOM(CONT)
What is this place, who the hell are you ?
TOM backs further down the hall.
TOM(CONT)
Answer me you cocksucker
TOM backs all the way up into ...
--To Be Continued -- maybe :P
HodderFan2004
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