[RavageRitual]

Ive Been Thinking about making a horror film for a long time now, ive gathered up lots of ideas, but i cant get past the beggining,

Heres what I have...Would a movie scare you right off the bat, if you are in a dark theatre, and the next thing you hear is screaming the most painful scream youve ever heard, but you cant see anything, next you hear somebody walking on a hard floor, as hes walking the screaming gets louder and more intense, finnaly a door swings open and for the first time in the film you can see but what you see isnt pretty, a boy of 7 yrs old laying in his bed, squirmin like a worm, gasping for air, while the boy is holding on to his stomach, he lets go and his insides fall out and soon the white sheets are govered in a dark red, he screams louder and louder. Then you hear the footsteps again and the camera comes closer to the boy, the boy looks into the camers and says "Allen", you then hear a rough deep voice reply.. Im sorry kid, but i have fed you a toxic poison, in which allowed your appendix to grow, and as you can see explode inside of you, the toxic fluid from indside your appendix has eaten your flesh, but dont worry, the pain will be gone soon..bye bye now. The camera turns around and heads for the door along with the footsteps.

Meet Allen Degenero, 23 year old child serial killer, Abused by people at school, all his life, and knows no different of them. Has no pity for any of his victims,

This is my first thing i have ever written, So I dont expect a whole lot of myself. But i would greatly apprictiate your help and your comments..good or bad. Thanks