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Originally posted by mothermold
it's good beginning.maybe a few more crime scene photos in quicker secession.i've seen more menacing photos of ed gein..you may want to go with one of those(unless you want to play up the guy next-door image)and the opening exterior of his house...drop the creaky door sound.maybe go with a photo snap sound and slow down the dissolve.
it looks good.
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i agree - the creaking door was a bit cheezy and i thought overall it was too evenly paced, kind of slow - i think some shifts in pacing - quick cuts, then slow fades, etc. - might add to the uneasy feeling (which the ending laughter captures very nicely). Overall B+!!