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You gave Freddy the most retarded lines ever. I only got through half the first chapter to realized that this was stupid.
The guy slams the door, and Freddy rams it open? When did Freddy become part of the LAPD? He would've turned the fuckin bus into a fuckin.....a fuckin....um...oven or some shit! Roasted his ass and watch him melt slowly.
Prepare to die kid? He would've made some witty comment or called him a bitch. And I doubt Freddy would ever be able to slice off someones head.
Actually, I'm going to read more of this....because I want to tear this thing a part.
What the fuck!? Who are these people? Where did they come from!? And why has Freddy gone through ninja training? And how did he even become ressurected? The story's subtitle is "The Ressurection". This story would make more sense if it was called "The Erection". And was about how Freddy couldn't get rid of a monster boner that he had because he took too much Viagra.
You sure do have a fetish of wrecking people genitals, some guy get's his up his ass or something, some girls pussy get's sliced and Freddy's are ripped off?? What's wrong? Did the Rabbi make a mistake on your bris or something and you're forever living with a mutilated schlong? This story makes absolutely no fucking sense.
I hope your happy, you've put shame to the name of Freddy Krueger.
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