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Originally posted by Zero
i have a horrific short story called REVENGE OF THE COPYEDITOR - its very gory and is filled with COMMA SPLICES (and DICES)!
geez- do you think your imagination is so awesome that your utter inability to render a single sentence within the broad parameters of the english language can be overcome. . .
(ALSO - PLEASE head down to the often neglected "post your fiction" section and spare us these ramblings)
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The "i" should be capitalized and you might want to put the story title in quotations considering you use all caps on certain parts of your sentences. Also, all caps is screaming. Why are you so loud?
Another thing "its" should be it's as in it is, "english" should be capitalized, "COPYEDITOR" is two words, the "g" in geez should be capitalized and "geez isn't a word. I think you meant "Jeez".
My, my, my... your command of the English language is astounding to say the least.
I think that just about does it. Of course, my inability to render a single sentence in the broad parameters of the English language may have affected my ability to edit this post.