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i occassionally read the fiction posts . . .but as i'm no writer i can't offer much feedback. the only thing i will say, and please don't take offense as i've not even read one of your stories (to my recollection) is that they generally are very unpolished. . . my suggestion, for what its worth, is that the folks who post in the fiction forum should start a writing group. . . one person posts their story, all the others offer feedback for a week; then rotate and read another person's story - - - this would give a chance for more systematic feedback and a chance to revise and even repost the stories

just a thought from a talent-less monkey