thanks guys. the script is in progress. its not just a script for diologue, but for how its being shot. heres what i got wrote so far.
INTRO
Empty desk against wall, killer sitting on chair, dim lighting
Camera zoom on back of killer. Killer sitting emotionless.
Camera cuts to scene of killer dragging body to lake, then back to the killer’s back.
Repeat process.
Body dump in the lake, then close up of blood dripping off killers hand onto the floor,
then close up of killers face (dim lighting)
Title displayed across scene, followed by several credits
Killer gets up, opens closet, puts on jacket, grabs baseball bat from closet, then walks out door
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