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Originally Posted by Vodstok
Gramps had used some of his friends in the Church to track down a certain type of man. In recent years, many priests had gotten in trouble for doing inappropriate things with children. These days, most were getting their just deserves, going to jail for their crimes.
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Just thought you might like to know that the correct figure of speech would be "just desserts", I believe.
I'm not just nitpicking about that one thing, I did read the entire story. On the whole, I thought it was quite clever. The subject matter is near and dear to my heart as well. I always enjoy reading stories or watching films where this type of scumbag gets what's coming to them.
One critique: I thought that the description of Gramps at the beginning was a bit overblown. It would have made for a cleaner paragraph to simply say that he was dressed all in black. Otherwise, I thought it was quite a fine job. I'll be reading the rest of your stories as well, when I have more time. Good work.
Oh, and I think that "Absolution" works better for the title.