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I liked it, it was very...poetic, lol. It has a lot of feeling to it and you can really relate to it, well kind of. I mean you can see yourself relating to it if you were in the same position.
It would work well as a monologue as well. I got a real monologue feel to it when i was reading it. Im a drama buff from school. Excellent job!
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