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computers are the antithesis of "cinematic" and characters sitting in a chair, typing and clicking seems really boring.
nothing wrong with the story, it just isn't a film.
it would make a much better short story
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"Little, vicious minds abound with anger and revenge, and are incapable of feeling the pleasure of forgiving their enemies."
Earl of Chesterfield
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Francis Bacon
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