[Doc Faustus]

Going for geek cred might very well work in this alternate universe. While I'm not specifically impressed, it might just work. Also, easing an audience into horror might be the answer. This world's people might be endeared by something strange in this vein. Good work. I expected something really in-your face innovative from you, but I won't let my expectations of your intellect and good taste get in the way of my judging. Next round, really make it your own and wow me.