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Old 03-23-2009, 12:19 PM
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Originally Posted by The Gate Master View Post
The first.

Scouse Mac looks around at the red walls of the huge hall. He takes a moment to look at the ornate carvings, then the familiar deep voice rings out, asking him the question. He contemplates for a moment, smiles to himself then speaks the anwer.

"Bill gets shot full of arrows."

There's a slight pause, and then...the usual deep rumbling, then the five stone archways light up, red energy flowing through them. He looks at them, then pulls a piece of paper out of his pocket. It has names, numbers and colours scribbled all over it in blood. He puts it back in his pocket then runs forward, into the second gate. Darkness, then, the walls around him light up. He laughs as he looks around. He is in the blue realm! Scouse Mac pulls the piece of paper and frantically crosses off the word blue with some blood from his finger. No soon has the paper gone into his pocket than a light appears in front of him.

A swirling ball of light and stone is in the middle of the grand hall. He takes off a show and throws it in. The shoe lights up, glowing a blinding yellow colour. He closes his eyes and looks back. The shoe is gone.

"What have I got to lose?" he mutters, as he runs forward and dives into the ball. He is instantly deafened by the electrical sound waves punping into his body. The light inside the ball is so intense his eyes melt. He tries to scream but the energy flows down his throat and disintegrates his lungs. He puts his hands to his face but they turn to ash. Slowly, his whole body blackens and caves in on itself.

Neverending and Chronogrl are both walking towards the second gate in the blue realm when they notice Scouse Mac enter. They turn to him and try to speak as a light appears, but they're fixed to the floor and as they shout out no sound is made. They try to get his attention but he doesn't seem to be able to see them. They watch in horror as Scouse Mac burns apart and disappears. The swirling ball fades away and suddenly they can move again. They run back to the spot where it all just happened. Nothing is there.

A rumbling sound, then pieces of rock start to fall from the ceiling. Neverending pulls Chronogrl away as one of the three glass balls suspended from the ceiling falls down and smashes on the stone floor. In the grey realm, Papillon Noir is backed against the wall, smashed glass in front of her also. She looks up at the glass balls, then the deep voice sounds;

"One of the Three..."

Papillon Noir shakes her head, then runs through the first gate.
NICE

Fantastically gory death, Mac.

Or IS he dead...? :D
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