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Old 08-22-2009, 07:27 PM
niyorco
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Originally Posted by Doc Faustus View Post
Rhythmically awkward and the rhyme doesn´t quite serve it. Sharpen your ear for language.
Thanks, but I'd prefer to leave it as it is. I appreciate you reading it.
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