[bwind22]

Last year I asked for help on a logline and got a ton of great advice that helped my feature script advance past the logline stage of the contest all the way to the finals.

I am in the same contest again and would appreciate input again if anyone's willing to help me out...



The Criminal Element

A guilt-ridden parolee looking to get back on the right track discovers that civilian life can be more complicated than life behind bars when he meets his new neighbors; a bookie in over his head with the mafia, a sociopathic landlord, a crackwhore and her innocent daughter.


Any input will be greatly appreciated. I'd also like feedback on the title, which I feel could be better. Thanks in advance for any help I get.