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Good points: Thank you for actually choosing shots and editing them together, unlike 90% of the amateur films posted here, which just point the camera and film whatever they see. Nice technique of using the black & white vs. the color.
Bad points: I'm not sure I understand what happened. At first I was confused at the point at which it changes from b&w to color, but now I think it might have to do with the character's points of view.
Bottom line: Good effort. Keep making films. You try different things, which is good.
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