I wrote this a few years ago, it's definetely a rough draft. Like the script I attempted, in my mind they're a different wiriting process. In the Halloween Script I tried to let the scene headings, describe the scene and paint a picture as much as possible, without having too in the story, because I know they have to be a certain length, to even get a look. If you don't know what that is, it's the (INT./EXT.) to let them know if they are shooting the scene inside or outside when they shoot. INTERIOR/EXTERIOR.
Michael in this one comes home to find his door already busted open, with the framing busted, then finds his family, and the intruder is still there. This one when I wrote it. I definetely attempted. Like I was playing as a character in a game, and quickly jotted down ideas, and put him in places that would cause conflicts that are out there at times. At the end if I could atleast get the idea out there as I portrayed it. I would play the game. obviously it's more the original resident evil more then anything. Ecspecially the ending, if you know it I ruined it, but I definetely didn't attempt it to go there, it's just where it led itself, as did the complete story to me had no idea where it was going to go. :eek:
And NAH, Critique away that's what I put it on here for, need help with where I'm failing. I appreciate it! Truly it can also give me a chance to clean it up or explain something you might not understand or mis interpret. In the halloween script also did'nt describe the landscape as much like I said accept with the headings, because I wanted to leave that up to the audience to do in their mind. Since majority who know the story can do that themselves and either put it in ZOMBIES style or CARPENTERS. :(
JK, I'm not sad :p
Yeah I got tons of ideas, if I could just atleast get the picture out of my head and in words. I guess that's all I'm really trying. A ghost writer or editor, that's what they are for. right? I know I could use one or possibly even both.
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I ain't afraid of NO GHOST! OK, maybe just a little!
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