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Old 06-16-2013, 03:30 PM
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Hey, I really like these! I think the simplistic art really goes well with the stories. It reminds me of Jules Feiffer. It's like you've broken down each image to just the neccessary elements.

Some of the storytelling techniques are quite sophisticated- like when you show the POV shot from the boy's eyeballs when he's falling asleep in the 666 Toaster.

I wouldn't change anything about these- except hiring a musician to make some original music so you could enter these in animation festivals.

Really enjoyed these, and hope you keep making more.

I've moved this post to the independent films section because these are not fiction posts, but short films.
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