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That was fun, but I feel so let down by there being no resolution to the ending. I loved reading it, there were a few grammatical errors and some punctuation issues, but that is to be expected. The breadth of the story was almost to great to be considered a "short" story. I loved that you explained so much, but if you attached a lengthy discovery and ending to the story, it could easily stretch into a novella. Keep up the great work and I look forward to seeing draft 2 when its done as well as anything else you want to post. We don't have enough writers on here.
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