Things that happen

Hi all.
Ive just started with film making,just finished my first one called Things that happen-volume 1. It's pretty amutar stuff and it's not the godfather..then again neither is godfather 3:)
Im doing a whole series of tales from the crypt type shorts.
Anyway,heres the first,any feedback or advice from a "proper" film maker would be very cool.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AFXm19HdozE

[newb]

not bad....it kept my interest.


you got to invest in a windsock for your mic.

Originally Posted by newb

not bad....it kept my interest.


you got to invest in a windsock for your mic.

Thanks,have done:)