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doing good, doing good.
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09-21-2009, 08:52 AM
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CHAPTER 14
INT. BLAKE CITY INSANE ASYLUM, LOBBY - DAY Two men in suits, one holding a clipboard and the other with his hands on his hips, clearly worried. The one with his hands on his hips looks at the receptionist behind the front desk. MAN #1 Could you please excuse yourself for a moment? She nods and walks away. The man turns to the other. MAN #1 So, is anybody missing? MAN #2 An inmate, named David Artaud. And Kemal. MAN #1 Kemal's missing? MAN #2 Yes, sir. We've looked for him but to no avail. MAN #1 Are you sure that's all that's missing? You called every employee and checked all of our residents, right? MAN #2 Everywhere except you know where. MAN #1 Why didn't you look there? That's where everything happened! MAN #2 If you want to go down there and get a vine shoved down your throat or cooked alive and eaten, be my guest. I don't get paid nearly enough to go down there. MAN #1 Fine. Man #1 reaches for a cell phone on his head and beeps a guard who soon arrives. The two walk down to the cells. INT. BLAKE CITY INSANE ASYLUM, HALLWAY - DAY The Man and The Guard stand in front of one the doors in the hallway. MAN #1 I mean, I took over this place with good intentions. Look what it gets me! GUARD Which one is this? MAN #1 Oh, Baren. "The stealer of superpowers". Responsible for the deaths of Senator David. He also has a reputation as a hero killer. Took the lives of The Green Gardener and The Aquatic Allies GUARD I've never heard of them, of course I've head of Senator David. But the other two I mean. MAN #1 The Green Gardener, Bradley Green, could use plants to his advantage. He was a botanist and some sort of reactions. Typical hero shit. He got strangled after Baren took his powers and strangled him with his own vine. The Aquatic Allies, Gary and Allen West, two kids, 12 at most. They were in a shipwreck and miraculously they could breathe underwater and swim at breakneck speed. Baren took their superpowers and drowned them where the ship went down a couple years before. GUARD How did he end up here if he's such a badass? MAN #1 Gore The Red got a help call from The Aquatic Allies. He punched him in the back of the head and got Blur to bring him in before he could wake up. The guard slides the key into the lock, he's missing. MAN #1 ...Fuck. Check the other two! Check the other two! The guard opens the door to discover that Zombie Man is also gone. MAN #1 Let's get this over with, let's confirm the Red Dynamo is gone. The guard puts the key into James Macky's door, when BOOM the metal door is thrown forward and pins the guard to the wall. James is leaning against it sending a current through it that fries the guard alive. Man #1 tries to run. RED DYNAMO Don't you run, Warden! Red Dynamo leans off of the door it falls over, the guard's charred corpse is stuck to the wall. INT. BLAKE CITY INSANE ASYLUM, LOBBY - DAY The Warden runs toward the front door when suddenly the casing for the fluorescent lighting bursts and Red Dynamo emerges from the light tubs. He grabs the Warden by the throat from behind and forces his sword through his spine and into out of his chest. He pulls it out and lets the Warden drop. He turns to the Receptionist and smiles.
RED DYNAMO Don't worry, I don't have a problem with you. Just the ones trying to keep me in here. You, Kemal, the inmates, you're all safe. Could you do me a favor? The Receptionist stares at him, paralyzed by the fear. RECEPTIONIST W... What? RED DYNAMO Hit the alarm under your desk. I know it's right there. Just hit it, so all of the guards will come out here and i don't have to look for them? And tell him to get out from under your desk. The man who was holding the clipboard crawls out from underneath the desk, Red Dynamo tosses his sword through his face, he walks over and pulls his sword free. The alarm begins to go off. Red Dynamo looks at the Receptionist. RED DYNAMO Thanks, Dollface. Your blouse is cute. Three guards suddenly tackle Red Dynamo to the ground. He sends a jolt of electricity straight to their hearts. Red Dynamo stands up RED DYNAMO One more... A guard rushes out and James punches him in the stomach with enough shock to burn a hole into it. organs and stomach acids drip out and he hits the ground. RED DYNAMO They still only keep five guards on staff, right? The Receptionist nods. RECEPTIONIST Yeah. RED DYNAMO Great, thanks. If you weren't so frightened by the death think I think you'd have made a great "Pink Dynamo" you're helpful and gorgeous. The Receptionist nods, Red Dynamo jumps over the front desk. The Receptionist backs away, Red Dynamo grabs her and kisses her, the static makes her hair start to stand up a bit. He pulls back. RED DYNAMO Might still work. Tell the cops Red Dynamo did this. James zips out the door. The Receptionist goes to wipe her lip but shocks her hand at first. She pushes her hair back down and sits in her chair, completely horrified and disoriented. |
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09-21-2009, 12:08 PM
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Quality, MM.
Good to see Red Dynamo getting back in the action.
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Good job. It's nice spending time with the villains.
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Brilliant as usual!
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Nice entry, MM :)
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damn. this is great.
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10-01-2009, 08:01 PM
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CHAPTER 15
INT. WEST COUNTY, REDCOCK FAMILY FARM, HOUSE - DAY The Redcock house is an average two-story house, the exterior could use some fresh paint, other than that it's a pretty normal place. But on the inside, the sole resident of the house, CHARLES ROBERT REDCOCK sleeps at the kitchen table with his head in his arms. A motorcycle's motor can be heard outside, getting closer to the house. The newspaper sits in front of him, three empty beer bottles rest on top of it to keep the rotating fan from blowing it away. A shadow is suddenly cast over him, a knock comes from the screen door. He lifts his head. His long, scraggly hair and beard obscure most of his face. His brown jumpsuit is covered in black stains and one red one across his chest. He walks to the door, BRIX steps inside. He's much taller than Charles. CHARLES Hey, Brix. Long time no see. How's the flamethrower treatin' ya? Brix notices the beer bottles BRIX You're still drinking? CHARLES Yeah, I only drink when I'm not working. But you're the only person who hires me. I guess I should figure out a way to advertise. You think they would give bus bench space to a guy who makes weapons? BRIX I have a new- Brix notices the red stain on Charles' jumpsuit. BRIX What's that? CHARLES Some kids a few farms over had a party, apparently they didn't appreciate ol' Haystack trying to have a good time. Luckily I had my toolbelt, lost one of my wrenches running from the parents though. Anyway, you have a new what? BRIX You ever consider trying your hand in vehicles? CHARLES Tried it, perfected it. I have a button under the steering wheel of my truck that can fire a bullet out of the exhaust pipe. I don't think I'd ever need it but it starts some great conversations. BRIX I want a van. CHARLES No problem. I still have an old junker I could fix up from my Deadhead years. What kind of toppings do ya want? BRIX I want it to be bulletproof, with tinted windows and plenty of space for my chopper and my weapons. CHARLES Invincible with room for toys. Got it. BRIX Good, I'll pay you when it's done. Brix turns to walk out. CHARLES Give me a few days. BRIX Of course. Brix continues walking. CHARLES Oh, by the way- Brix turns around. CHARLES (Cont'd.) Do you want me to paint it? I mean, green isn't that scary and "Shaggin' Wagon" written on the side probably isn't intimidating either. BRIX Paint it. CHARLES Great, thanks for your continued business. Brix walks out the door and hops onto motorcycle and speeds off of the Redcock Family Farm. Charles walks downstairs into the basement and opens up a closet in the far end of the room. He walks down to- INT. WEST COUNTY, REDCOCK FAMILY FARM, WORKSHOP - DAY A huge workshop, the tables are littered in metal pieces and tools, a ramp leads up to an empty aircraft hanger on the property to allow the entry and exit of vehicles. The van is already in the workshop, bright green, the windows have Grateful Dead stickers on the back and just as he said, "Shaggin' Wagon" is written on the side.
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10-02-2009, 06:36 AM
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Hahaha, love the setting of the scene. I can picture it perfectly. And Charles is cool, I wanna see more of him!
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10-12-2009, 11:43 AM
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A very short one.
CHAPTER 16 INT. TWILIGHT CITY, DAVID ARTAUD'S APARTMENT - DAY David is on the couch with his eyes closed, unconscious. Baren, tall, bald, cold and emotionless sits near him. Zombie Man is chained in the kitchen. Baren watches the television, another episode of PRIM8. Zombie Man continues to tug at the chains, saliva has formed a puddle around him. David opens his eyes and wakes up in a panic, after spotting Baren he cowers at the end of the couch. BAREN So you were being truthful. David gets up to run to the door located in the kitchen when Zombie Man leaps forward at the doorway into the kitchen. David stumbles back. ARTAUD What are you doing here? Why am I home? BAREN You said you wouldn't be yourself when you awoke. You asked us to keep you from leaving. I may not be a caring man, but I'm an honorable one. The fulfillment of my wish to once again be free is well worth the exchange for the fulfillment of your wishes. ARTAUD Good, now that you've passed. Allow me to leave. ZOMBIE MAN You said that if you got away... I may as well eat your flesh... I hope to... BAREN You told us how you would prove to us that you were again Momus. ARTAUD Momus? BAREN You know that you're a very interesting case. David begins to scream for somebody to help him. Baren stands and puts his finger to his mouth. ZOMBIE MAN You'll wake... the dead! That isn't... even... planned until... later. BAREN Don't bother to try and shout for help, I've already taken the liberties of disposing of your neighbors, just as Momus instructed. INT. TWILIGHT CITY, DAVID ARTAUD'S APARTMENT, HALLWAY - DAY Thick branches have formed in front of David's door, vines climb the walls of the hallway, each and every other door in the hallway has been smashed open and all of the people inside every room viciously slaughtered.
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