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And the poem's not bad, but it could use a little work. Keep it up though. 
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01-20-2006, 12:14 PM
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scaryminda15
thanks for ur support all. k heres another poem
why do people got to be so mean just because im not so lean it is not my fault i feel like hiding in a vault i have my friends the laughter never ends my looks could use some work why do u treat me like a slap of pork i might not be skinny but at least people think im funny thats more than what i can say about u im trying not to be rude but its true please let me be me for a change i try to rearrange but my life doest keep up so please just shut up this doesnt go towards any girl or guy but sometimes i feel i should buy for a change of skin may my kin like me so for the ones who ridicule you just not cool so quit use that niceness in ur heart and ur wit k bye all ill stay tall and proud and loud thank u all for reading this poem
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01-20-2006, 12:15 PM
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Who treats you like a slap of pork?
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MISINTUPITATED- The act of removing the spine by use of fire. DEVESTED- The removal of one's vest. SCTUPP- To deficate on a woman after nonconsensual sex.
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01-20-2006, 12:16 PM
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my family and people look at me like im a pig thanks for caring
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Don't bad i am a total outcast....
I love books and i am constently making matters worse so i am pritty fucked up in a since....Rite ftf????YJ???? they know me from skol and i am so fucked up i can't even be labled PSYCO!!!hehehe thank Goddess thou,I would rather be labled EMO:p :D no really i would
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01-20-2006, 12:25 PM
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It looks like SOMEONE NEEDS A SELF-CONFIDENCE BOOST. Turn that frown upside-downside. Smile a bit. Don't feel so bad.
In regards to the poetry, I think you should write more of it. Here's an idea: Try writing some poetry that only rhymes PART of the time--say, 30 or 40 percent would be fine. The other 60 percent of the time, well, just allow it to NOT rhyme. OMG! I can't stop rhyming!
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01-20-2006, 12:32 PM
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MISINTUPITATED- The act of removing the spine by use of fire. DEVESTED- The removal of one's vest. SCTUPP- To deficate on a woman after nonconsensual sex.
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