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05-15-2009, 03:34 AM
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Its awesome so far! I sooooooo can't wait until Screech comes in! :D
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05-16-2009, 05:28 PM
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As a person or two may have noticed I included Roderick Usher in a small part even though he never submitted a character. I'm going to try that with Kemal this time. Another quickie.
CHAPTER 4 FADE IN: INT. BLAKE CITY INSANE ASLYUM, JAMES MACKY'S CELL - DAY James Macky awakes in his cell, dazed. He's clearly been drugged. His clothes have been replaced by a white t-shirt and white sweatpants. He stands and weakly walks toward the door that is completely covered in rubber. There is a knock from the outside followed by a deep voice. KEMAL (O.S.) (laughs) You up, Dynamo? MACKY Is that you, Kemal? KEMAL (O.S.) Yep. You know what that means, right? MACKY Lunch. KEMAL (O.S. You've been out longer than you thought. It's dinner time. A small plastic tube feeds out of the wall and pours in a gas that puts Macky right to sleep. He hits the rubber floor of his cell. The tube goes back into the wall. Kemal opens the door and enters. He's a large, intimidating black man. He's holding a dinner tray and wearing a gas mask. He places it by Macky's face and walks out. Kemal pushes forward a rack, two trays sit atop it. He stops outside of the next cell, removes his gas mask and bangs on the door. KEMAL It's 4:30. Supper time, Mr. Romero! INT. BLAKE CITY INSANE ASYLUM, JASON ROMERO'S CELL - DAY Sitting in the corner of the room is what looks to be a corpse. But it lifts it's head, this is Jason Romero, the ZOMBIE MAN. His hair is in tufts, long and thin. His eyes are the shame shade of yellow that his teeth are. His skin is browned, dried, and cracked. The lower-right bit of his jaw is missing, as he turns his head his tongue swings out of the opening. The door opens and Kemal walks in. Jason leaps forward. Pulled back by a chain attached to the wall. Kemal laughs at him. KEMAL You never learn do you. Saliva begins to pour out of the opening of Romero's mouth. He speaks, his voice slurred. ROMERO I've been thinking about this since I got here. KEMAL What's that? The apple cobbler? ROMERO The second your flesh touches my tongue. KEMAL Well, the apple cobbler's close enough. Kemal exits the cell. INT. BLAKE CITY INSANE ASYLUM, HALLWAY - DAY Kemal pushes the cart to the last cell, it seems less secure than the rest. It's clearly a trusted resident's cell. Kemal opens the door and steps back. He looks in at a dead body of an inmate. He quickly grabs his walkie-talkie.
KEMAL (into walkie talkie) We need help, Mr. Lee is- Kemal stops moving, drops to his knees. Then becomes alert again, he looks around, his body now seems strange to him. He gets worried. KEMAL No, no, no. He grabs his name-tag and reads it. KEMAL No! It was supposed to be an inmate! |
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05-18-2009, 12:14 PM
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Hm. I'm gonna give this a selfish little bump.
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I can't give an exact chapter he'll be introduced but he's getting at least one chapter devoted to him and he plays a crucial part toward the end.
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Wow! it's a pleasure to see Romero'r first appearance!:)
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A very nice introduction for Lee. I'm having fun reading this.
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05-19-2009, 07:34 AM
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As usual, very good, MM.
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05-25-2009, 06:16 AM
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sweetness!
love it. :cool:
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Any chance of another chapter? I need my fix!
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