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Tattoo work.
I have a friend who is a pretty talented tattoo artist. I have him working on a Lament Configuration tattoo for my leg. This was his first rough sketch, its pretty freaking good. I told him I wanted to hooks to look a little more mean. They are normally more straight with bends than hook shaped. I also suggested serrating the hooks a bit, and increasing the size of the links in the chains slightly. What do yall think? Any other suggestions?
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I think serrated edges would be cool!
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The box's dimensions look off. Asymmetrical. The top chain needs to be longer, even if some of the chain needs to spilled off the the side, ie-not taunt like the others. I like how the part before the hooks isn't fully defined, but I think it would not look right unless you're skin is so pale its near white. The designs of the box are good and seem accurate which is very good.. The blades around the circle opening for me are too much. Sometimes a piece is better when you take something away.
I hope this doesn't sound too harsh. If you do end up tattooing it on you I think it needs to be as close to perfect as you can get.
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Pictures below show the hook design I'm going for and the box open.
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Fantastic work! Your friend is quite talented! Anxious to see the updated piece 8)
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