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10-23-2008, 11:16 AM
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Short Horror Film
Hey guys, I just made a short film for a filmmaking contest out in Sacramento. I'm just looking for some feedback or suggestions and thought this would be a good place to start. Here's the link, the competition required a 30 second intro and to film the last 6 minutes of a supposed feature film.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yu01E8j3r18 Thanks! 
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10-23-2008, 11:39 AM
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Not bad.
What happens to the guy after he gets stabbed in the eye? He kind of just disappears. A couple of the shots are way too dark. I know it's at night, but a couple times I couldn't see ANYTHING on the screen- it was just black.
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10-23-2008, 12:34 PM
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Hey dude I thought that short was actually pretty fucking cool. NE it might have been the screen you were watching it on because for the most part I saw everything you needed to see happening. I never once felt lost or not sure what was happening.
Great job man. You should totally check out my short flick if you ever get the chance. Send me a PM and I will give you the link if you are interested.
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10-23-2008, 12:40 PM
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That's possible.
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