a new film we created...

[sniped90]

here is a link to a film me and my mates made for film studies..we got a B in the end for it..its not horror, that's why i posted it under general..

it's called DeAdMan and it's a short film
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bcII9VHRkdA

[Posher778]

It's not *general* either.

[sniped90]

so should it have been posted under the homemade movie section thing?

[neverending]

Cool little film.

You really need to get in much tighter with your shots though- there's not a true closeup in the whole thing. In film it's the details that draw us in. Get in close and show us.

[sniped90]

Originally Posted by neverending

Cool little film.

You really need to get in much tighter with your shots though- there's not a true closeup in the whole thing. In film it's the details that draw us in. Get in close and show us.

thanks for the contructive criticism man, appreciated, i'm gunna make a film soon but it will be horror/psychoogical sorta thing..i'll take this into account ;)